This is my first draft for my report on Poland. I have a list of questions to answer and when I have done this, I will need to make the whole report flow.
The currency that they use is złotys.
PICTURE?
Poland has a democracy. Democracy means everyone gets a chance to say which party they want.
Poland is best known for smoked meats and as the country which has been invaded alot. Its been invaded 43 times since the 1600s.
The country located in Eastern Europe.
Poland is 312679 km square. That's pretty big but not as big as Australia. You could fit Poland into Australia 23 times.
There is 38 million people in Poland. Wow. Australia has 23 million!
The main language is Polish, but they also speak other languages such as kashubian (108,000) german (98,000) Belarusian (26,000) rusyn (6,000) Lithuanian (5,000) Slovak (1,000) Czech (1,000)
The flag has the national colours on it.
The currency that they use is złotys.
PICTURE?
the national animal is a bielik eagle.
Poland has a democracy. Democracy means everyone gets a chance to say which party they want.
People live in houses that don't really look like those in Brisbane.
If you were going to be a tourist to visit this country you would have to see is bieszczady mountans,Tatra mountains,białowieża forest.
Feedback
Lilly, this is a great first draft. I've noted in your draft a few things which you need to add in, which include a map and pictures.
Remember names of people and places are proper nouns and they need capital letters.
Look at the Australian one we did together to see the sorts of things we included.
Next draft ( you forgot to include these things)
You need to explain what a democracy is.
Research what foods are typical there and what some of the yummiest things to eat are. Put in photos as well.
What are the main festivals?
What are the main historical or important dates?
What famous people came from the country?
Why would you ( or anyone) go and visit Poland?
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