Saturday, September 13, 2014

Star - my first poem

I have been learning about poems and wrote my own here.  Mum says its really good.


Light bright
in the air
bright my night
send me a wish
looking down
at the world
from high above
like a bird
lofty softly
in the sky

I'm not much good with rhyming but mum said poems don't need to rhyme.

1 comment:

Penny said...

Hi Lilly

A lovely poem - the moon has been brilliant this week - really large and silver - almost as bright as day!