Spanish 11 Animals

cat- cat

dog- perro

cow- vaca

sheep- ovejas

horse- caballo

fish-peces

frog- rana

mouse- ratón

rat- rata

rabbit- conejo

monkey- mono

pig- cerdo

Eureka Stockade - Second Draft.

I am learning to write reports. this is my second draft on a report on the Eureka Stockade. ( Mums suggestions and mark ups are in capitals)

The eureka stockade is a important part of Australia's history. CAPITAL LETTERS FOR THE NAME OF A PLACE OR EVENT

The Eureka stockade was in Ballarat,Victoria. The actual stockade was built on baker hill. They mined gold around Ballarat during the Goldrush. The people who mined for gold themselves diggers.

WHAT HAPPENED TO THE DIGGERS TO MAKE THEM FEEL LIKE REBELLING?

The men came together at about 8 o'clock on the 2nd of December 1854 and created a distinct place where the men could muster and be drilled. There was 10000 diggers. ( PLEASE CHECK THIS NUMBER. I THINK IT WAS LESS THAN THIS)

The battle lasted for 15 mins. 23 diggers and 15 troopers died. MORE NEEDED HERE.
WHO WAS IN CHARGE OF THE REBELLION? WHAT WERE THEY HOPING TO ACHIEVE? WHAT HAPPENED TO THE PERSON IN CHARGE?   HOW MANY PEOPLE WERE IN THE STOCKADE WHEN IT WAS RAIDED?  WHERE WERE EVERYONE ELSE?

The flag was a southern cross with a blue background. WHAT FLAG?  


CONCLUSION - WHAT CHANGED?  WHAT DID THE GOVERNMENT DO FROM THEN ONWARD? WHY IS THAT IMPORTANT TO AUSTRALIA AND TO THE WORKFORCE?

Todays Spelling words I got wrong!

I have been doing spelling tests and been doing well with them. I have made some mistakes and now am using these words in sentences to help me learn them better.

Encouraged: The children encouraged me to go swimming in the sea.

Approaching: The teacher started approaching the room.

Queue: We waited in the queue for hours to see a movie.

Wreckage: The children saw the wreckage of my pencil when it dropped.

Disappearance: The disappearance of the fish was heartbreaking.

Rhythmic: I heard the rhythmic sound of the rain dropping on the wet floor.
Extinct: Dinosaurs have been extinct for a long time.

Believe: You must believe in yourself to do things you don't want to do.

Intelligent: Dolphins are more intelligent than humans.

Majestic: The castle that we went to was majestic.

Feedback. Some beautiful sentences here Lilly.

Spanish lesson 7 eating

Bill please- cuenta por favor

I’d like- me gustaría

Can I have the menu-  ¿ peudo tenet el menú

Breakfast- desayuno

lunch- almuerzo

dinner- cena

salad- ensalada

hamburger- hamburuesa

rice- arroz

beef- carne

chicken- pollo

vegetables-verduras 

fish- peces

Spelling words I got wrong!

I have been doing spelling tests and ben doing well with them. I have made some mistakes and now am using these words in sentences to help me learn them better.

Normally: I normally ride my bike to school.

Character: my favourite character from Spongebob is Sandy.

Headache: I hate having a headache on a school day.

Pioneers: The Pioneers found a new island.

Wander: I would love to wander around the garden.

Friendship: me and my friend love our friendship bracelets.

Operator: the Operator pushed the green button.

Eureka stockade - First draft

I am learning to write reports. this is my first draft on a report on the Eureka Stockade. ( Mums suggestions and mark ups are in capitals)

The eureka stockade is a important part of Australia's history.The date of the rebellion is the 2nd of december 1854.

The Eureka stockade was in Ballerat,Victoria. The actual stockade was built on baker hill. They mined gold. They called themselves the diggers. (WHAT WAS LIFE LIKE FOR A DIGGER?)

The men came together at about 8 o'clock (WHAT DATE?) and created a distinct place where the men could muster and be drilled. (WHY DID THEY DO THIS? WHAT EVENTS LEAD TO THIS?) There was 10000 diggers.

The battle lasted for 15 mins. WHO WAS IN CHARGE OF THE REBELLION? WHAT WERE THEY HOPING TO ACHIEVE? WHAT HAPPENED TO THE PERSON IN CHARGE?  HOW MANY PEOPLE DIED? HOW MANY PEOPLE WERE IN THE STOCKADE WHEN IT WAS RAIDED?  WHERE WERE EVERYONE ELSE?

The flag was a southern cross with a blue background.

IN THE REPORT OUTLINE IT ASKS YOU TO USE A PICTURE AS WELL. I GAVE YOU A LINK TO A HEAP OF PICTURES TO INSERT. PLEASE GO BACK AND LOOK AT THE LINKS AND INFORMATION.

Book review A fairy princess has been here

In the book it tells you about a little girl called Jamie solving a mystery about  a fairy princess being in her house.

The first clue was that there was sparkles on the floor and only a fairy drops fairy sparkle dust. Then she finds a note that has purple pen writing on it and it says " dear Jamie I love you and don't ever forget it! F.P" and F.P stands for fairy princess.

Next she finds a cup with tea in it and it is proof she's been there.  She finds a box that says my prince and has a bunch of pictures inside it. In the bathroom she finds fairy dust (makeup) and a fairy definitely needs makeup. At last her mum calls her and her mum was going on a date and Jamie gets a baby sitter.

 I would give it a 9/10 I really like this fairy princess story.